Juxtaposition of nature and urban: ‘jumbled heap’ and ‘the steep’- vertical in nature thus ascension and therefore progression/
Use of Enjambment: ‘steep/ Nature’s observatory’- there is a flow created, nature is seamless, similar to the imagination
Lexis of movement and transition: ‘river’s crystal swell’ and ‘deer’s swift leap’- suggests nature can transform and bring into fruition something new (aids the imagination)/ nature is living as opposed to the cold hearted urban environments
Dualism: ‘my soul’s pleasure’ and ‘two kindred spirits flee’- the notion man is more than just the rational being; flourishing and free (‘pleasure’ and ‘flee’); this is man’s true state…
Assonance: ‘bee’, ‘these’ ‘thee’- pleasing to the ear, nature is beauty as well
Alexander Pope’s ‘Solitude’ (exemplar of the Augustinian/rationalist view of the self and of nature)
The sublime and beauty of nature- as seen in ‘The Wanderer above the Sea of Fog’
Rousseau and other Romantics (Wordsworth and Coleridge in the Lakes for example) took long walks in nature to reflect
Use of simile- (‘like some watcher of the skies’), discovery and adventure; ‘watcher’ actively seeking, fear that what he is doing is not good enough
Classical references: ‘Homer ruled’ and ‘in fealty to Apollo hold.
’- the authority the Ancient world commands; wisdom, music and poetry associated with this power; the influence of poetry ‘ruled’- a world he has created…
Sublime- ‘Looked at each other with a wild surmise- silent’- use of the hyphen- emphasizes the sense of awe and wonder
‘…his eagle eyes.’- ‘eyes’- visual (discovery and reading)
Chapman vs. Pope- Pope’s translation was more methodical and objective; Chapman’s was far more imaginative
New discoveries- Uranus was first spotted and recorded in 1781
‘Gluts twice ten thousand’- flooding, the coming of something new; ‘gluts’- appetite of the sea, again use of personification;
‘Wideness of the sea’- takes up one’s whole vision, allows us to understand and put life into perspective;
‘fed too much with cloying melody’- the idea of appetite is fulfilled here; ‘cloying’ too sweet; ‘melody’ the sensory image used here; the sea can be healing
‘…when the last winds of Heaven were unbound…’- freedom (‘unbound’), chaos, sublime and magnificent
Any links to his illness
‘green felicity’- intense and extreme happiness, also use of the color ‘green’ *could indicate some kind of jealousy*
‘sweet forgetting’- cannot know of suffering, the serenity afforded in not being able to think as we can
‘frozen time’ and ‘bubblings’- for man time is permanent, nature has the luxury of transience and circular time
‘numbed sense’- the joy of being inanimate
-the rhyme scheme- the last word of each stanza rhymes- implying nature is cyclical
Romanticism and nature- he differs from the standard type
The individual and Romanticism- he explores the pain he alone feels
‘Shakespearian fruit’- appetite but also we are fulfilled in reading- replenished as happens in Catharsis
‘old oak forest I am gone’- wisdom and fantasy; out of this world and lost
‘new Phoenix wings to fly at my desire.’- rebirth and freedom
‘consumed’- the notion that death is coming soon
‘the bitter-sweet’- catharsis- this is what we gain from tragedy…
‘impassioned clay’- though trapped in stasis there is something trying to get out (mind vs. body but also the immortal locked down to the mortal)
Use of the Shakespearean sonnet
Coleridge and Shakespeare- All Romantics heavily influenced by him
The role and importance of the imagination
The ‘Cockney-poet’- Keats is establishing his credentials as educated here again…
‘high-piled books’- like pillars- associations with Parthenon and the Athenians- intellectualism
‘Hold like rich garners the full ripened grain’- fear that he will not get chance to read these- the association between energy (as gained from food) and imagination- connected in life (extended use of imagery)
‘fair creature’ and ‘faery power’- the idealized love he wishes to have- links to the imagination- also links to his real romances that he had
‘…on the shore of the wide world’- an outsider and alone- as though much of what is good in life can be gained without worldly pleasures or he still has a lot to gain
‘…to nothingness do sink’- no idealism, Christian God or duality- he is accepting the world as he sees it
His experiences as an apothecary
His status as the ‘Cockney poet’
Romanticist fascination with the imagination
Use of the sublime (‘shore of the wide world’)
Relationship with Fanny Brawne
‘palely loitering’- no aim, also ill and ghostlike (gothic imagery)
‘a fading rose’- ‘rose’ the sign of masculinity; ‘fading’ suggesting death; use of color as well; ‘rose’- passion and this is also leaving him
‘hair was long’/ ‘eyes were wild’- sexual connotations, freedom but also madness- the difficulties of desire are encapsulated…
‘garland’- he is always active, she passive- suggestive of power and control; elevation and worship- warning about the excesses of love
‘she took me to her elfin grot’- control shifts- the fantasy element kicks in (‘elfin grot’); implies he has become a servant to the mind
‘Pale warriors…. hath thee in thrall’- traditional image of male strength, now weak and pathetic, ghostly- the haunting effect implies that we are haunted by our inner fears
Fanny Brawne- romance
The imagination/Negative Capability- being lost in the mind; the standard that can never be reached
Romanticism and its Gothic link- e.g. Coleridge in the Rime…
The use of older tale: by Alain Chartier– courtly romance is spun around and turned upside down
‘…in the midst of thine hymn’- beauty and rest in the arts; ‘midst’ atmosphere- completely caught up in this desire
‘…thy poppy throws’- the relinquishing of pain through laudanum
‘…breeding many woes’- ‘breeding’- new life only creates pain
‘the hushed casket of my soul’
‘save me from curious conscience’- use of alliteration but also the plea, life is too much…needs relief…
Use of the poppy- e.g. Kublai Khan by Coleridge
Romanticism’s (sometimes) rejection of Christianity- ‘the Amen’ comes before the ‘poppy’ as though pain relief is better than a belief that life will continue; partially because Keats does not want it to.
‘soft conched ear’- enclosed and secret, though beautiful and aesthetically pleasing
‘I dreamt’- the blurring between reality and imagination
‘…whispering roof/Of leaves.’- nature as personal (through personification and protective)
‘…to make delicious moan’- use of synaesthesia- the desire to worship her, sexual connotations…
‘…no incense sweet’- draws upon current conditions
‘…too late for antique vows’- the sense of transient and the passing
‘…in some untrodden region of my mind’- he worships her through creation and imagination
‘…branched thoughts, new grown with pleasant pain…’
‘a bright torch’- liberty, imagination, the soul — heat- passion
‘…to let the warm love in.’- again thermal imagery….
Keats’s own appreciation of beauty and desire for immortal love….
Romanticist attitudes towards religion- should be of the mind- ‘my mind is my church'(Thomas Paine)
Keats’s appreciation for the Classics
Coleridge’s poem ‘Psyche’- he uses it to explore the Soul; Keats does a bit…
Nature as bringing out beauty, love, the soul and freedom- could link in the ideas of Rousseau- man must be free in nature…
‘their love grew tender/ every eve deeper and tender still;’- the fantastical idealized portrayal of love in society
Use of simile: ‘constant as her vespers’- the religiosity
The association of illness with love — ‘sick longing’
Synaesthesia: ‘The inward fragrance of each other’s heart’
‘Enriched from ancestral merchandise…’
‘For them his ears gushed blood;’
Use of anaphora- ‘Why were they proud?’ — he clearly values art above material wealth
Use of address mid way- speaks to Boccaccio- acknowledges that what is happening is only art; so what does this demonstrate?
‘Each richer by his being a murderer’
‘I forget the taste of earthly bliss/ That paleness warms my grave…’
‘Thy beauty grows on me…’
‘Her silk played in purple phantasies [sic]…’- royalty and passion
‘Twas love- cold, dead indeed, but not dethroned…’
The love between Fanny Brawne and Keats, their relationship was forbidden given that he had little means to provide for himself
The carnal nature of the Gothic
Keats’s own fears about wealth
The social unrest and criticism of the status quo (e.g. Blanketeers and Peter’s Fields)- reflects the criticism he levels against the brothers…
‘…visions of delight.’- almost sounds innocent
‘…honeyed middle of the night’- appetite and desire are included in this; the emphasis on the sweet…
‘…couch supine their beauties, lily white’- the idea of purity and beauty together- the ideal of a woman- they also have to do this, no indication of the preparation of the men…
‘Of Heaven with upward eyes for all that they desire…’- looking up- suggesting that true desire should be focused on the eternal and not the material… Use of religion as well
‘…yearning like a God in pain.’- Madeline is idealized (‘God’) but also the fine line between pleasure and pain- is this something we should desire?
‘…worship all unseen’- use of religious imagery to discuss Madeline; ‘unseen’- doesn’t actually know what he is getting
‘…Yet men will murder upon holy days…’- as though men and women are different, both driven by base desires
‘… full blown rose.’ and ‘purple riot’- images of masculinity and passion
‘…The maiden’s chamber, silken, hushed and chaste;’
‘…Loosens her fragrant bodice by degrees/creeps rustling to her knees.’- use of onomatopoeia
‘… painful change…’
‘…Made tuneable with every sweetest vow.’
‘…he melted, as the rose/ Blendeth its odour with the violet…’
‘…they glide like phantoms’
‘…Were long be-nightmared.’ — the sense of trauma in desire
Keats’s use of prostitutes as outlined in Motion’s biography
Keats’s constant need to have his love re-affirmed by Fanny Brawne
The idealization of Romanticism- the perfect ideal in the mind
also…
The use of the night in Romanticism…
‘swell the gourd’/’plump the hazel shells’- plenty, full of life- ‘swell’- growing- almost too much for him to handle…
‘sweet kernel’- senses pleased, enjoyment
‘Drowsed with the fume of poppies’- drug allusion, the serenity he feels in being in dream like state
‘…last oozing’- euphonic sound created by the elongated vowel- the fact something is coming to an end… the desire for it to last that bit longer
Use of the questions- ‘Where are the songs of Spring?’- breaks up the flow established in the previous stanza, nature brings reflection + the desire for it to keep going… proves other seasons are inferior
Use of alliteration- ‘soft dying day’- distracts from the sense of passing/ alternatively/ it makes the passing sweet and the atmosphere of melancholy is created…
The use of the falling cadence at the end ‘in the skies’- the final acceptance of death coming…
The harvest season an important part of 19th century England
The natural world and Romanticism… very important!
”Conspiring’ is stripped of all the paranoid, plotting connotations it had for the Elizabethan courtly intrigue poets and the morally upright poets of the Augustan period.’- Daljit Nagra
Transformation of the soul
The imagination….
‘placid sandals… white robes graced…’
-serene portrayal of the figures…
-perfect; as though they are forms…
‘The blissful cloud of summer indolence.’
-lingering, precipitates (no pun intended) something worse happening
-‘benumbed my eyes… my pulse grew less and less.’- growth and death- lack of feeling- the anathema of what the Romantics strived for…
‘and ached for wings…’ – the desire to go beyond the present
-pleasure/pain dichotomy…
‘ambition pale of cheek.’- the idea that this causes destruction…
‘demon Poesy’- hardest to control, the one he desires most, the one he can’t get rid of…’
Rhyme scheme- ‘joy’ and ‘annoy’ +’noons’ and ‘moons’- juxtaposing concepts are linked- much as pleasure and pain- the relaxation feel of indolence contrasted with the pain at missing out on living life…
‘My soul had been a law besprinkled o’er with flowers…’- passivity, manicured- not the rough romantic image of nature and the soul…
‘The morn was clouded.’- he is merely putting off that which is bothersome…
‘…for I would not be dieted with praise, A pet-lamb in a sentimental farce!’– ‘pet’- does want idle praise or ‘lamb’- rejects notion of innocence; a reflection on the embarrassment he feels as a poet….
‘Vanish… Into the clouds.’- he is not really serious about vanquishing these feelings, he wants them still- would be just too far to banish these…
The exact date in relation to other odes is unknown- could have been composed before or after… either way this does not matter since it either means that his rejection of the figures is a mistake or the culmination of the reflections of the other odes…
Phidias- the architect who built the statue of Athena at the Parthenon
The Elgin Marbles- reignited people’s interest in the Greek mythos and culture…
The soul and its development
Emotion and mood…
‘poisonous wine’- the dichotomy between the sweet and the poison
‘rosary of yew-berries’- compound noun- prayer and death associated- don’t put the faith in death as a release…
‘downy owl’ and ‘death moth’- flying – the release of the soul- ‘owl’- wisdom- progression from day to night- life to death
‘sudden from heaven like a weeping cloud.’- repetition of natural cycles, how it suddenly comes on- no warning… ‘heaven’- the mixture of pain and salvation… required for us to learn and to develop… ‘cloud’- a reference to one of his letters…
‘fosters the droop-headed flowers all… hides the green hill in an April shroud.’- images of death and restoration- growth of the soul…
sublime, natural and transient images in the remedies for melancholy….
Personification of melancholy- ‘Emprison her soft hand’- conquest
‘feed deep deep upon her peerless eyes.’- symmetry, euphonic sound, repetition- appetite
‘bee mouth sips’- sting and pleasure of honey
‘Though seen of none save him whose strenuous tongue….’ – to know melancholy one must know fully joy…
Personification- ‘unravished bride of quietness’- source of pleasure; wanting to be tapped but never will; ‘quietness’- the use of sound
Broken meter/ use of questions- ‘What mad pursuit?’- use of ‘mad’ is important here- consumed in emotion
Synaesthesia- ‘Heard melodies are sweet, but those unheard are sweeter’- first of all: recurring imagery of sweetness- nourishing; second of all:’unheard’ – silence is an important part of this (contemplation) but also it is that which we never hear that is good (much as what we never see or taste is better than the reality)
Use of rhyme- ‘grieve’ and ‘leave’ are paired (these have connotations of sadness and the end to something) contrasted with ‘kiss’ and ‘bliss’ which implies sensatory pleasure and eternal feeling- this encapsulates the inherent contradiction in the poem
The use of natural imagery- ‘Your leaves, nor ever bid the Spring adieu’
‘Burning’ and ‘parched’- as if being kept in eternity is no good for anyone (‘layers of ekphrasis’ as Dr. Corina Russell refers to it as)
The end chiasmus- a question or this what Keats truly believes?
Is Keats thus challenging the interpretation of the Pastoral Tradition fostered by the Neo-Classicists?
-‘O for a life of sensations rather than thoughts.’
-Negative Capability
-‘What the imagination seizes as beauty must be truth…. fondness and yearning for the beautiful.’
-Keats got a private viewing of the Elgin Marbles in 1816 (**see notes on the Massolit Russell lectures for more detail on the Elgin Marbles**)
References to the Classical World- e.g. ‘Hemlock’, Socrates
Synaesthesia- ‘some melodious plot’- nature as musical- a source of inspiration and imagination
Thermal Imagery- ‘Cooled a long age in the deep delved earth,’- further we go into nature the more we can gain from it for our own benefit.
‘leave the world unseen’- death or a higher state of being- the two are equivocated (goes back to Plato’s “Apology”)
Animated imagery- ‘viewless wings of poetry.’- idea of ascension and freedom encapsulated in the wings
‘Thou was not born for death, immortal Bird!’ – the idea of the eternal figure of beauty and freedom is encapsulated in the Nightingale…
Biblical imagery/ref.- ‘Through the sad heart of Ruth…’- Keats is own personal sacrifice is mirrored in this; concept of hope is introduced
Eternity- ‘thy plaintive anthem fades.’- the idea that it can never truly die or go away; it can merely be moved away from (much as Keats will now awake)
Keats’s own death filled life- his brother, Tom dying recently, and his mother’s death in 1810
Romantic conception of the Nightingale- previously alluded to by Coleridge; the idea of the night song (a concept developed in music by Chopin and various others)
Prof. Blanning’s analysis of the night and song in Romanticism: it is either the sign of irrationality or the release and freedom (contradictory in other words)
Eternity
Love
Ideal vs. the real
Personification- ‘sleepless Eremite’
Transient images: ‘moving waters…’
‘…soft-fallen mask/ Of snow upon’
The volta- ‘No’- defiant and wishes to establish his own steadfastness
‘Pillowed upon my fair love’s ripening breast,’
‘To feel.’- he can get sensations- the star can have no these
Shakespearean sonnet- ends with couplet- contradiction- ‘breath’ and ‘death’
Another contradiction- ‘sweet unrest’
Keats would address Fanny as his ‘star’
Transcribed next to Shakespeare’s ‘A Lover’s Complaint’
Severn maintains it was written as his last poem and done in 1821
Keats: Selected Poems. (2017, Nov 28). Retrieved from https://paperap.com/paper-on-keats-selected-poems/